Angel of Death

Merry Awe, thanks so much! Your reviews always make me smile and I was a bit worried that it wouldn't be too good but I guess I write my best ...

Thanks dianis97! I'm glad you enjoyed it. I was hoping I was able to capture her character perfectly because she's a really diverse character which shows in the book. And ...

Thanks Kirsten! I was hoping it was going to be moving, because I cried as I was writing this. This was possibly the only story that I wrote that got ...

Charlotte. Jane Eyre is a classic. ~Angel

Hey Jiggy! A light breeze brushed pass ed , leaving a wave of goosebumps in its wake. In the distance, forbidding temples towered against a backdrop of mountains. What a ...

Hey Jiggy! No, he corrected himself, this is far worse. I think the is should be was. Dark streets crowded him, streetlights glaring with disapproval. Don't like the way this ...

WarriorOfTheBrimstone: Thanks for your review! I was worried about it not sounding right but I'm glad you can hear it in your head without problems. Yeah, I get emotional every ...

Hey Jiggs! Darkness swept down on silent moth wings. He was covered in blood and gore, a match for the mess before him. Even his weary, ancient eyes turned away ...

Okay, I'd rather read the rest of this then eat, cuz I have all the time in the world to eat, so here's the other half of my critique. One ...

Thanks Jack! This critique was very helpful and it was a really good 1,001st review if I say so myself. Yeah, I kinda felt that the characters weren't fleshed out ...

Hey Adrian! I quite liked this and I believe it's another one of my favorites from you. This captured the true essence of love and not just "Don't leave me, ...

This was...was beyond brilliant! Really, I enjoyed every second and minute of this and I feel that this is one of your best works yet. I've never read anything like ...

The beginning of it was alright. Wasn't a hook, but it wasn't bad either. The talk about his parents was interesting, but got slightly drab because I don't know him ...

Thanks for the critique aloe! This poem was written for a contest and the reason why kiss is bolded is because in this contest you have to use certain words ...

Thanks for the review Fangala. This really made me smile. I had to go through a lot of editing with this piece before I got it just right, and I'm ...